I Refuse to Be Executed a Second Time

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1. imhere2simp

   I don’t recommend this unless you want to have brain damage.

   Ella( FL) is the absolute Saint. Hardworking and kindhearted. She was almost perfect until later on she decides to compete against Isabella over ML 😑

   Isabella: FL sister is the opposite. Self centered/narcissistic aka spoiled child. Only has her looks and her mother backing her tyranny. Likes to manipulate people using her body 😑

   Prince Gil: I was hoping there would be a 2nd ML, but unfortunately he’s the ML. Has no opinion for himself “what my father the king tells me, I will obey” 😑 He’s kinda stoic/robotic. He knows of Isabella’s tyranny, but still wants to marry her just because his father wants it. So basically he’s trash.

   Isabella’s mother(FL step-mother): She’s like the stepmother in Cinderella plus the illegal activity because she likes to bribe minor nobles. She’s just as terrible as Isabella.

   FLs father: ???*crickets*

   The King: He’s a dumb ruler. Also knows of Isabella’s tyranny but still wants to marry off his son to her 😑

   In sum, the story has so many plot holes. A lot of things doesn’t make any sense. You’ll have more questions than answers. Who turned time??? Where was FLs father all this time?? I almost have aneurysm reading, so with that being said 2⭐/5

   February 18, 2023 at 3:49 am

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2. Iklary

   It’s not bad and on a border to be good.

   The MC reggresses after beeng executed on a false charge. She cut ties with her family and flees to the remote and rural domain of the kingdom with a thought of seccession, but lately become involved in a fight for the queen position. The MC seems to do a good job at administering tasks, although this isn’t shown, just the results; plus excells at diplomacy and relationships with the employees and lower classes. But she lacks wealth and support of nobility and the current king, at which her opponent, her stepsister, excells at.

   The MC is rather smart, but mostly reactive, not pro. The protagonist’s character is writen moderately, neither flat, not deep. Others…. cardboard mostly with a few exceptions.

   There are number of thropes (a lot, if you think about it), but the story seems solid. Or consistant, for a better word. The pacing is decent with a little lean towards the slow side.

   Verdict – it’s not a waste, but you have little to lose by passing by. 6/10 (ch 43)

   February 17, 2023 at 6:46 pm

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3. kikimifzoi

   Argh I dont like the ml that much just my opinion 🥱

   February 17, 2023 at 11:35 am

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